Major Fix

Okay this is mostly a bugfix, but I've added a few features.  First there's been a major overhaul on grammatical error and fixes.  Second, there are now default ages, and you can now customize Tiffany's age even though it doesn't effect the game yet.  Also I've replaced the word "Thinking" when character's have a thought to Italic Format.  There's no new scenes or anything though.  Enjoy.